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Buhru

By Buhru

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: WHen a player goesout side of his characters role to find out information and figures out the weakness of a player while never having met the person
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When a player decides to enact an undneiable attack such as deacpitating another player without giving the opposing party another chance
    Status: Accepted

Being born around the time of the confederation war Lerenzo didn't have what some would say a normal childhood and due to the fact that Lerenzo's mother was human she had great difficulty giving birth to Lerenzo which caused her to die during his birth and while he is the offspring of a dark elf father and heartlander mother Lerenzo grew up without ever knowing who his father was and never knew of his heritage because Dark elves didn't take kindly to halfbreeds. At the age of 12 he was caught by a Heart lander blacksmith named Krilic Cervantes who took him in and raised him as his own blood. while growing up Cervantes learned the value of family, hard work and loyalty while maturing he started to notice things, bad things Raids, Murders and things of that sort. One day he saw a woman bearing children being harassed by a couple of bar drunkards Lerenzo does what he thinks is best and attempts to help out the lady. thinking he could take all of them on Lerenzo is ambushed and beaten to a pulp. while in a dark shady alley he came upon the revalation that you cant save everyone, this revelation made his heart grow somewhat cold that sense of justice that he once had 

Character Name: Lerenzo Cervantes
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: being part human part elf Lerenzo shares traits from both races such as pointy ears longevity and a bulky physique
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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Ø  Your lore reference of the Iblees' war doesn't make sense given your character's age- they wouldn't have been alive for is as far as I know (Send me through the links to the relevant wiki pages if I'm incorrect). Please change this, and look for lore pertaining to our current map 'Atlas'

 

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

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Ivoreyy

I see you've made the edit I requested, which is great! I just need you to now add a lore reference in your biography, one that would make sense given your characters age. Take a look at our wiki for a city name, world event, culture reference or similar from our current map, 'Altas'

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Unfortunately I don't think your character would've been alive to witness the Black Scourge either, as that group was present on a map we left long ago, and disbanded almost 300 years ago in roleplay. When looking for lore, make sure it's relating to the current map Atlas
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On behalf of the server and AT members I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me make an /atreq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or similar.

 

Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our New Player Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our Application team,meet other server players and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server.

 

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Happy roleplaying!


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