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Javick
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Ban #8352
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You should not act on real life knowledge, only on what your character knows.Ace does not know his brothers location even though I know him in real life.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Your character shouldnt be able to do anything unrealistic or doesnt fit the role. Ace cannot use spells because he is a human and has neevr trained with magic.
    Status: Accepted

     Ace and his twin brother Travis were born to mother Ada and her Third Atlas Coalition War veteran husband Chase. To their parents dismay,
the children had the habit of accidentally breaking vases, plates, and windows around the house while fighting with sparring swords. When 
Ace wasn't sparring with Travis he would be talking to his wise mother about the history and current events of the world yet barely seen 
by his curious eyes. The family moved to the newly established Imperium Renatum along with many other Heartlanders .After reaching 12 years of
age the kids' differences became more noticeable. Ace and his mother would go on for hours asking each other challengingquestions to exercise
the mind. The families' celebration for the kids' 15th birthday was an unforgettable one. Ace received a book with no author, passed down from
his mother who claimed it was important along with a hunting knife from his father. One afternoon during a strong storm two men with a carriage
seeking shelter were allowed inside by Ace. The friendly men began to ask questions about where the man of the house was and Ace began to worry.
Loud knocking interrupted the tense conversation to Ace’s relief. He opened the door and was instantly knocked down by his father who barged in
and scanned the room until he met the eyes of the two men in the house. They all unsheathed their blades and Ace fell onto his knees at the horrific
sight of the carriage unloading armed men like a fountain, he could not see his father surviving the onslaught. But Travis couldn’t bear to stay upstairs
and watch over Ada when he had a knack for fighting. He drew his sword and ran downstairs where he saw his brother had given up, but he slashed through
the assassins until he and his father were back to back. The armed men warned Travis that they were there for his father and he could still live,
but Travis was determined to help his father. The room went silent as Travis stopped talking and released a scream of pain. Ace had sent his 
hunting knife into his brother’s shoulder and taken control of the room. Their father was ready for death and said his goodbyes before a dagger 
entered his heart. Ada screamed as she ran downstairs to attack theman who landed the final blow. Without time to stop her, Travis and Ace watched
as she jumped into another knife, marking the end of their parents and the only happiness the boys had left. The assassins left the home while the
boys sat on the floor, both hurt beyond repair. Travis blames Ace for his father’s death while Ace blamed Travis for his mother. They each went 
their separate ways, but the two brothers now harbor deep hatred for each other, and it would not bode well if they were to encounter each
other again.
 


Character Name: Ace
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A man of normal stature wiht whiteish blonde hair and blue eyes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Pending

 

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  • Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are almost there, however, I’d like you to try explaining the definition in a more conventional way, along with the examples you provided. Please refer to the definitions on the wiki, and make sure to convey the correct definition in your own words.

  • Your interesting facts are a little vague. Please elaborate on each of them; you could try adding in why/how they developed each of these traits/facts.

 

Hey there Javick! Your application is well written and for the most part done well, with the exception of a few but minor mistakes. However, they can be fixed with a couple of tweaks and you’ll be set for being accepted onto the server! With that, you have 24 hours to make the necessary changes needed. Failing to make these changes within the allotted time will return in an automatic denial, though upon request I’ll be able to grant more time for your corrections.

 

The server wiki page has a great deal of important lore information. You can also join our New Player Discord where you can ask questions to our Community Staff, and meet other server players.

 

For future assistance and/or questions, feel free to contact me through discord at MrMineLoveDude#1404, or by issuing /msg MrMineLoveDude in-game. You can also issue /creq on the server to open a Community Staff ticket!

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Congratulations Javick! On behalf of the Community Team, we’d like to officially welcome you to the Lord of the Craft community. You’ll have a just a few brief moments while we get you whitelisted on the server and ready to go. Feel free to continue reading the rules or browsing the forums and/or wiki for more information or directly contact me if you prefer to!

 

If you’d like in-game guidance or assistance, feel free to contact me or any Community Team Member, and ask for a Wilven Monk, or otherwise just ask for assistance with becoming acclimated to LotC. You are encouraged to join our  New Player Discord, that is solely used for helping new players attune to our unique server, filled with many helpers and other CT members who are more than willing to help. 

 

Should you need help at any point in the future, please contact me through discord at MrMineLoveDude#1404, or by issuing /msg MrMineLoveDude in-game. You can also issue /creq on the server to open a Community Staff ticket!

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