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YBPhoenix

By YBPhoenix

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is using outside help to help in game, it's also the issue of using OOC (Out-Of Character) Information in-game.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Someone having the power to just simply do something without a struggle to the situation. (Not realistic)
    Status: Accepted

In the the coldest winter ever upon the Highlands, in the city of Curon, a child was born with the bluest of eyes, Arisen, came to be the baby’s name. During the winter the boy suffered harshly from the extreme cold; nevertheless, he managed to survive. In the coming years, he was praised by the rest of the children, but little did Arisen know they grew jealous of his eyes. One night, in the late Fall, two of the boys who were a bit older than him decided to pull a “joke” on him. And so, the boys put him in a sack whilst he slept and decided to throw him into the river; however, Arisen awoke, but it was too late. He was pulled down from the current and swept away from the city he called home. Eventually, Arisen was found on shore not too far from his home, but he didn’t know which way to go on the trail. So he headed down the path opposite of his home,  going towards the city of Fenn. Arisen soon arrived in Fenn, where he was brought in by a blacksmith. This blacksmith however, grew hatred towards Arisen for his popularity, but decided to use him to bring in people. Arisen grew aware of this and left without warning. He follows the path of nature and grows to like being alone and silent, so he may listen to life speak to him. (Not in literal terms.)

Character Name: Arisen
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: White Tunic with Green Overcoat, leather satchel, and leather elbow-pads. Torn brown pants and Leather Boots. || Icy Blue eyes and silky brown hair.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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SoulReapingWolf

Changed Status to Under Review

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

  • Your definitions on metagaming and powergaming are lacking, I suggest using examples to show understanding of the concept.
  • Your biography mentions your character has abnormal abilities and mentions locations from the universe of The Lord of The Rings, our server has its own lore please make sure you use it and there are no mentions of other universes lore. Make sure your biography is at least seven complete sentences long and has at LEAST two lore pieces from OUR server. (Your BIO can’t include any kind of magic, magical object)
  • Your character description is fine except for the corrupted red eye
  • Your interesting facts should follow the following format
    • Positive (Strengths, skills, abilities, achievements)
    • Neutral (Likes, Dislikes, hobbies and personality traits)
    • Negative (Weakness, fears, flaws)
  • Your skin is not appropriate for the server, please find one that is in our Skin Archive or create one that is more fitting

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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YBPhoenix

The following changes have been made as requested, please overlook to find any other mistakes. If no mistakes are found, that would be alright with not only you, but with my part as well.

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SoulReapingWolf

I am happy to inform you that you’ve been

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Your journey has only begun, adventure awaits in the lands of Arcas!

If you have any other questions feel free to message me through the forums or discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul)#1674, you can also join our New Player Discord, where you can talk and ask questions to other players from the server. If you have any doubts on how the server works make sure you use our New Player Guide! this guide is filled with tons of useful information to help you understand the server during your newcomer stage. Upon your arrival to Arcas, the monks from Cloud Temple will be there to guide you towards your desired destiny.

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