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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using outside knowledge in an RP situation. For example attacking enemy at location x because your friend told you over discord.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Overpowering another character without opportunity for resistance or counterplay.
    Status: Accepted

Balrik is a typical orc. He spends his days bashing in the faces of his fellow Orcs and causing trouble in the camp. When work needs to be done he will probably be found sleeping anywhere with soft ground. War brings out the best in him and put his violent nature to good use.
Balrik is grew up part of the Raguk clan. He grew up travelling with them and fighting in various battles. When Malgunuz disappeared he left the clan to partake in his own endeavors and become what he is today.
Balrik spends much of his time raiding and pillaging the lands of men, he has an intense hatred for them calling them “puny humeez” or “axe holdaz”.


Character Name: Balrik
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Young & muscular Orc, quite tall but has hunched posture. He has short black hair with a top knot.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Ø  Your powergaming definition, although headed in the right direction is still not quite what I’m looking for. Please read up on the meaning of the term here, and use this information to add to your definition!

 

Ø  Your biography does not contain any server lore, and is still a bit short. Please add a few sentenced to expand upon the biography you have now, and add atleast two references to the server lore, found here on the wiki.

 

You have 24 hours to make the requested changes. If you have any questions do not hesitate to contact me using the contact information below.

 

You can join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community Team, and meet other server players.

 

Be sure to read through the new player guide for more information on various rules, terms and the server itself!

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279) or by /msg (marb121) in-game for any questions or concerns.

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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For the following reason(s):


 

Ø  Sanjezal, although a valid lore reference was a settlement in one of the server’s previous realms, Vailor. Currently we are in Arcas. Logically, and when taking your character’s age into consideration, they would have grown up in a settlement on Arcas, and would have been born in the realm before the current one, Atlas. Please be sure to change this.

 

Ø  In addition to the above change, I would like to see you add atleast one more reference, alongside of the above.

 

You have 24 hours to make the requested changes. If you have any questions do not hesitate to contact me using the contact information below.

 

You can join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community Team, and meet other server players.

 

Be sure to read through the new player guide for more information on various rules, terms and the server itself!

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279) or by /msg (marb121) in-game for any questions or concerns.

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On behalf of the server and Community Team members, I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! Should you have any further questions, feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279), or by /msg (marb121) in-game.

 

You can find our New Player Guide right here. It contains all sorts of useful information, I highly recommend reading up on it as it will help you to get settled on the server much more easily!

 

Be sure to visit the wiki and forums for more information on the servers lore, roleplay situations and much more!  You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.

 

Happy roleplaying!

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