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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Its like if you are talking in a Irl perspective
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is kind of like being negative towards the games progress
    Status: Denied

I grew up in Atlas it was a wild and untamed land scape  and my dream as a elf was to travel all across the world searching for amazing stuff to bring back to my family. well some people in atlas did not like it there but i did not know why i was a good bows men i loved being a elf and he hated the dark elfs because they killed his father and they had the sun stone which was his weakness because he is a snow elf but what gave him strength was snow he love the snow a lot so did his mom and dad most of all so when i travel around the world i will also kill all the dark elfs and destroy the sun stone that is my true goal.


Character Name: PUgz
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: IF some one looked at me they would probably tell i am a elf because i have a bow on my back and i have elf cloths
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Due to the fact that you haven't made an account on the forums yet,  which makes you unable to make any potential edits to your application as there were some missing points about it.

Please do make the following changes before you can make another application, you may re-apply as soon as possible:

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✦  Your metagame and powergaming definitions seem to be a bit mixed up with another source, please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example that will complement the definition you have right now as your examples aren't what we're currently looking out for right now. Consider contacting on me on discord if you need further explanation.

 

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory.

 

✦ Use appropriate name for your character, do note that elves don't culturally don't turn into adults until they hit 50 years old.

 

✦ Your character descriptions seem rather lackluster, try to add something about the characters features like color of their hair, eyes or how tall they might be.

 

✦ At least one weakness should be mentioned under your interesting facts, though I'd recommend that you expand your interesting facts to full sentences.

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I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091. You can always make a ticket in game as well simply by doing /atreq if you have any questions

 

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