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13E666L13

By 13E666L13

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: 13E666L13#1322
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Having fun role playing
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: idk what that is
    Status: Denied

I grew up as a son of a human and a dwarf that weren't accepted into any community because they are together even when they are from different races, so they created a home in a forest where I learned to use the bow and the axe, then I decided to have a trip in the outside world where I found great wonders and continued on exploring, but when I came back home a group of raiders apparently killed my parents and looted my childhood home, from that point onwards I decided to become the best warrior the world has ever seen(from this traumatic experience I developed some psychological problems.. some will be solved over time but some haunt me).

 
Character Name: Josephus
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Athletic, purple eyes, black hair, 1.90 meters tall(6.2336 feet), brown ish color, either wears a weird thing he found on a body or hunter cloths.
Roleplay Scenario:

I do not come here seeking wealth or leadership, I simply come here on behalf of my dead family and on behalf of revenge, revenge for the vile and despicable men in this world that will see there death, and on behalf of becoming the greatest warrior of this kingdoms.

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason that too many errors were made.

 

→ your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

→  Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least TWO! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Humans can't have purple eyes! 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans#Heartlanders

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

→ Your  likes, dislikes and fear must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason please <3 

→Your Roleplay Scenario Response is lacking some things! It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. The dialogue should be surrounded by quotes please.

→Your Skin is not up to LotC standards!

 

If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Demon_Lilly#9033, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

→ https://discord.com/invite/7sTjWYX

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