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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: HenryM#6361
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The use of outside knowledge that your character would otherwise not know to complete a task or take advantage of a situation.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Your character taking unfair actions such as one shotting an opponent or healing some sort of wounds which you have no way of doing so.
    Status: Denied

https://docs.google.com/document/d/151kHnsA8ESMFJ2jwmM5RuZJQPiSOFccYerdcAD3v9Vg/edit?usp=sharing  (this is the link for my google doc containing my personality traits. I am having some sort of issue with the amount of characters I can put in each box, I am so sorry!) 

Este was born into a family of modest holdings who lived within a group of highly secretive and tucked away high elves. This group had sat out of any war or engagement fought by the rest of the world, not sending aid against Sauron or offering any aid to any other kingdom. They had a policy of total isolation and wished to keep it that way, shunning all advances of outsiders and censoring any who proposed they should share their knowledge with the world. They had a unique grasp on medicine and healing many would be envious to have. This sets up the city of Moro Anore, the city where Este was born and raised. As a young boy he shattered his leg in an unfortunate accident when he fell from a balcony. Despite the medicine and care he was able to receive his leg never fully recovered, destining him to be unable to pursue the life of marksmanship and ways of warfare many other boys his age wanted to pursue.  Instead he set about learning from his mother, who taught him all she knew about the art of healing and medicine. teaching him to brew cures for ailments and how to use seemingly simple herbs as expert pain killers. He was fascinated by this and despite the negative attention he received from his father and the rejection he faced from everyone else, he was content. That was until the day when he was out exploring on his own, see despite being crippled este had a good idea of how to sneak around places, routinely outwitting the guards and taking long strolls away from the safety of his cities walls. He stumbled upon a young boy hanging limply from a wagon, his side impaled with what seemed to be the jagged end of an orc’s dagger and his family dead around him. In an attempt to save the boy Este snuck him home and did everything in his power to heal him. Putting him into a stable condition, or at least giving him time. When he was found out the boy was promptly put to death and Este was punished severely. Being cast into a prison cell and left to rot. Este was resigned to his fate until one day perhaps a year later, he wasnt sure, the door to his cell swung open. There stood his father, a man who had always despised and hated him. His father told him to run, that he had pulled some political strings and that is este left as of tonight and never return, he may go. So with that Este grabbed as many herbs and special ingredients he could and set off on the adventure we know him to be on today...

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   


Character Name: Estë
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 57
Physical Description: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WHwHxwGnRgC6W9WxNXLmRsywcN0S9yOII5u1CinjgnM/edit?usp=sharing

Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

The young elf quickly spins on the spot and flashes a small grin at the man, admiring him for his sense of wear and his own... less than perfect attire. Despite this he quickly states, “Hello there! my name is Este, I come in look of a job.” He says this all rather fast as he isn’t quite sure how society works outside of the family he left behind. “I am a healer!” he adds quickly in a tone that almost seems like he is attempting to yell down at the man. With this he pulls out his bag to brandish a hand full of small flasks, while they seem old and dirty there is no mistaking the light shimmer of the liquids inside. “I wish to discuss these with a local healer, could you show me the way?” he politely asks the man. 

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • You mentioned LOTR lore (Lord of the rings). We aren’t related to LOTR in any way. Please revise, and get accustomed to our lore and reapply if you choose.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @ Nozoa#5616, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa 

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