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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information that your character doesn't know.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Making your action look more powerful so that your opponent looks like a noob.
    Status: Denied

This is the story of Connor Wylde.

 

Connor Wylde was born in 1643 in a poor family who could barely get one bread a week. 
He only had 3 sisters so he and his dad had to work in the mines. 

 

One day the mine collapsed and Connor saw his father being crushed before his eyes. 

Connor was the only survivor but because he had seen those gruesome images he was traumatised and didn't want to talk for 2 years.

 

When he finnaly wanted to talk his voice sounded growling and nobody recognized his voice. 

The family had to sell their house because their father was no longer there to make money and Connor was scared to go in the mines again.

 

After living on the street for a year his youngest sister, Mary, got sick and died in her sleep. A few days later the army wanted to recruit young boys to become knights.
Connors mother said he had to participate so that he could have a better life. He left his family behind and joined the knights.

 

In his training he had to kill other boys to prove himself to his leader. He was left in cold mountains where he had to fight against wild animals. 
He lived in the mountains for five months. After the training of his survival instincts he was picked up and he was ready to join the Knights.

 

After 3 years of working as a knight his leader said he had to kill a thief and gave him a location. When he arrived at the location he saw his older sister who said his mother and sister where killed by the knights. 
Connor was furious and went to his leader, he killed him and fled.

 

His story will devellop from this point...
 


Character Name: Connor Wylde
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Connor is a silent man who is smart but sometimes his aggression takes over and he can become very dangerous. His weapons of choice are a bow and axe.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft!

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- Your definition of powergaming is somewhat correct, but I need you to adjust your wording for clarification. You may look up the definitions in google or from our wiki, but be warned that plagiarism (Copy-pasting) isn’t allowed. You must write it in your own words, or it will result in an immediate denial. Lord of the Craft's wiki link for the definitions & lore: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/ 

adding examples would help.

- You must include one weakness among the three interesting facts about your character.

- You must reference at least one piece of the lore in your biography; such as the name of a city, a guild, a notable figure, attractions & landmarks, a past occurrence / event, etc.

You may find such in our wiki. Link: https://www.wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

 

*Failure to make any changes within 24 hours will result in a denial.

 

Fret not! You should be good upon making the aforementioned changes.

 

Apart from these, you are set! If you have any questions, feel free to message me on the forums, ingame (By typing /msg Boruto) or on Discord @Callisto#6280

You could request a ticket ingame for help at anytime using the command /atrequest or you could toss your questions on the ingame chat!

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Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft!

Unfortunately, your application has been…

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24 hours had passed without any edits to the post. Feel free to re-apply again with the following changes:

- Your definition of powergaming is incorrect, please ensure that it is corrected in your next application. You may look up the definitions in google or from our wiki, but be warned that plagiarism (Copy-pasting) isn’t allowed. You must write it in your own words, or it will result in an immediate denial. Lord of the Craft's wiki link for the definitions & lore: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

- Your definition of metagaming is correct, but I advise you to adjust your wording for clarification.

- You must include one weakness among the three interesting facts about your character.

- You must reference at least one piece of the lore in your biography; such as the name of a city, a guild, a notable figure, attractions & landmarks, a past occurance / event, etc.

You may find such in our wiki. Link: https://www.wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

Apart from these, you are set! If you have any questions, feel free to message me on the forums, ingame (By typing /msg Boruto) or on Discord @Callisto#6280

You could request a ticket ingame for help at anytime using the command /atrequest or you could toss your questions on the ingame chat!

If you need any help, I suggest you join our new players' discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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