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Under review.

Pending.

Your application has been placed under pending for the following reasons along with some suggestions -

- Include where on Axios your persona's family was from

- What exactly was this order of Knights? Knightly orders typically must be from the server lore or a current organization in the server, usually required an application

- Regarding the point above, I recommend not saying that your persona served in an order of Knights

- Please avoid the whole "killed the others around his age, survived in etc, etc, etc." as this tends to be overused quite often; be original, we want to see how creative you can be

- Also do avoid the "betrayal of an order, turn against leader and kill him, etc, etc." as this also is overused like the point stated above

- Finally, I'd recommend giving a few personality traits and perhaps some traits as well: though this is up to you

You'll have 24 hours to make the needed changes: these changes can be made by clicking the edit underneath your application. If you think you may need additional time for whatever reason, don't hesitate to inform me and I will be more than happy to give you extra time. If you have questions regarding the server lore (the forums and wiki are great for finding information) feel free to let me or another AT member know. 

Denied. 

Your application was a duplicate. Though please consider what was said.