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    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you know something but your charcher doesn't
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When your/someone's charcter forces actions
    Status: Denied

Ayala comes from the kingdom Fenn,  and lived quite a good life. Her family was what she considered the best and she thought she had everything even though she definitely did not. One day her father (Ashton) decided  to stop for a drink at the local tavern. This later on became a routine he wouldn't ever stop. He started to cheat on Ayala's mother (Winter) but then would come home late and abuse her. Later on he began to abuse Ayala and her sister (Fiona). One day Winter disobeyed Ashton and said she couldn't take it any more and she was going to leave with the girls first thing in the morning. Ashton went crazy and killed Winter. He put their small house on lock down and kept the girls as slaves and continued to abuse them. Fiona was 25 when she got pregnant. Ayala knew how much time herself and her sister had to escape and so every night she would sketch and plan out how to escape. She told Fiona what to do and they successfully escaped from horror that was her father. Ayala now lives a happy life with her sister and her nephew. 

Character Name: Ayala Iris
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Ayala is quite tall, has white hair, dark blue eyes and wears a mostly blue dress and a bow in her hair.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

Your application has been...

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-Your application has been denied due to the fact that you have a guest account, guests cannot edit their applications so we cannot place them on pending. In the near future I recommend creating a forum account to ease your application process.

 

-Please refine your character's biography a little bit. Fiona having a child at 25 (while possible) does not fit our server lore. Please remember elves are not culturally adults until 50 and do not have children until well into their 100s. 

 

-Please refine your character's three interesting facts to reflect upon her strengths and weaknesses and how they affect her.

    -To further this I will use an example of one of your interesting facts:

"Can't trust people due to trama"

Do this strengthen or weaken her? How does this affect her? Why does this affect her?

 

-If you need any help please feel free to message me on the forums (you will need an account for this) or message me on discord BritBritt#1506 (second brit has second t), you may reapply in six hours.

 

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