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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: gxiah8804
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Altering the phrasing to suggest an attempt at an action
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Not using information found outside of the server
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Brizinghom
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 47
Physical Description: Wears a long, dark piece of clothing covering his body from head to toe, a sword and a dagger on his left, a leather pouch on his right. His face is h
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

I remove my sword and dagger, keeping them in their scabbard, and gently put them on the floor. I sit down, legs crossed in front of me and look at her, studying how time has aged her so much, and deciding if she is now ready ... I hold my right hand, palm facing up, between us; a few seconds pass, then minutes, then hours. At last, the air over my hand trembles, a dim blue light sparks and an amulet appears - hovering over my palm. "You may get back what is yours now, what has always been yours", I say. She looks at me, then at the amulet and a smile appears on her face - She hasn't smiled for so long, her face seemed to be hurting from it. Her lips move, "I knew you would come" she says.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your character doesn’t talk about it.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 
  • Please change your character’s actions to 3rd person. Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.
  • Your Physical Description could use a bit more detail! If you’re unsure what to add, consider including details like height, eye color, hair color and length, clothing style, and other distinctive features. These are all great starting points!
  • Unfortunately, you cannot apply with a mask covering your character’s face on your Minecraft skin. This is to ensure you’re aware of the rules, that the race you chose is appropriate, and that your skin matches your physical description. Once you’re accepted onto the server, you can use your masked skin. If you need help adding a face to your skin, please contact me or another community member, or you can do it yourself. For face options, you can also check out our skin archive → https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

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Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

My discord is @cheese1sgrater if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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