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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Like talking about RP outside of RP and telling someone or doing something that you have to do in RP outside of RP
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power over another players actions like *I walk up to bob and cut his arm off * it would have yo be like * he would walk up to bob and aim his sword to cut his arm off*
    Status: Denied

Slade comes from an elf Town. in this town humans are hated for taking elf land and killing them. Slade Wonders why humans are so bad. he had met a few travelers that were humans and they were nice. ever time he asked his 30 year old brother he replied with "You may be and Adult now Slade but you are still to young to understand" Since there was so much hate toward humans there were none in his Town. So he set of to find a place where both Elfs and Humans were respected the same. he came across a human Town and lived there for 6 months. when he returned to his Town the Elfs lost all respect for him. his own brother would not even look him in the eyes. Since slade was never being treated like and Adult elf with truth and age, he set off to find a better place.


Character Name: Slade
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 70
Physical Description: Likes Human / Mostly nice / freindly / Disowned
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

Your description should describe your skin.

One of your three interesting character facts needs to be a weakness.

Your biography is littered with spelling mistakes, and also you'll need a lore reference. If you need help with this, contact me!

Your metagaming definition is a bit off.

Because you are a guest account, the application will be denied due to you being unable to edit the mistakes in the app. I recommend you apply with a forum account.

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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