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By Zuna

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    Discord: panodechao
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: by either communicating to staff or roleplaying it out by improvising, and try to avoid it.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it brakes the rolepaying completly, since the characters are not supposed to know that info.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Isis Lumie ré
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: 5'5 and 100 lbs White hair and hazel eyes, noble robe outifit adorned with gold, and a small one handed bag.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

 

She pauses, then with a trembling voice trying to pretend she remembers the hag she says:

  • uh… yeah! It 's you. Nice to see you! 

She expects an answer, but gets nothing, then she sits in the cushion shy, she takes a deep breath and begins

  • My story…. right? It's complicated, I grew up in a peaceful noble city, it's not like i didnt like it. But it got boring, I felt, no, I knew I was destined for more…

She paused… took moon shaped amulet in her hand, and then continues

  • After my mom passed away, this suddenly appeared to me… i still dont know what it does, but i must find out 

 

This is how she would respond. More info about her: 

  • She left her family behind without a notice (2 brothers and her father) e seu melhor amigo de infância. 
  • She wants to discover the amulet secrets and learn magic. 
  • She always remembers her and her mother stargazing . 
  • She studied a lot of astrology 
  • She left with nothing but a small bag with food and the amulet.
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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Your response is not quite right. Describe how you would avoid committing powergaming Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out.
  • Please translate the Portuguese in your application. LOTC is an English-language-only server. Additionally, please fix your grammar, spelling, & punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. It's typically pretty accurate with English grammar.
  • Please clarify the nature of the "amulet" in your scenario response. Please keep-in-mind, your character must be fully mundane when it is created and is unable to know skills such as magic/alchemy or possesses objects of a similar nature.
     

 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 48 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.
 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord, Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the New Player Guide here could help you!
 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire) or by /msg Evonpire in-game for any questions or concerns.

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Due to: Time's up!

 

If you believe this was denied by mistake contact me through the information below. You may make a new application whenever.

  

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire). You can join our Discord, if you want to ask for any help from us!

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