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LordPengu
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Meta-Gaming:When you gther information about a game like in the internet or from friends
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergamers are people who are playing video games too intens,the ''Powerplayer'' wants to make his charakter stronger and stuff with his freetime
    Status: Denied

-Name:LordPengu

-Age:32

-Fav. Food:Meat

-Is scared of:Vampires

-Target for live:Killing the Bandits and become richest man in middle earth

-Race;Human

-Childhood:Haven’t had one


Character Name: LordPengu
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 32
Physical Description: The LordPengu is just a man wandering throught middle earth where he lost his wife and family from bandits.His Target became to eliminate the bandits.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Unfortunately, at this time this application has been denied for the following reasons:

  • Your Backstory, unfortunately, is not in the correct format. Here on Lord of the Craft we require you to come up with a short paragraph (3-4 sentences) explaining your characters background: Where they were born, what they did in their childhood, how they got to being where they are now, occupation, etc. 

  • You must include 2 pieces of server lore into your Backstory.

  • Vampires, unfortunately, are not common knowledge and as such a fear of one may not be possible. A fear of undead, however, is possible!

  • Middle Earth is the name of the realm in Lord of the Rings. This is not the name of the realms in Lord of the Craft. I can understand the confusion.

  • Your Interesting Facts must feature one negative trait about your character. 

  • The name ‘Lord Pengu’ unfortunately is not a fitting name for a Human. This can certainly be his title, however he must have a name. I recommend using a Fantasy Name generator!

I would recommend looking at the useful links I posted below. Have a read over our Wiki and try and find out more about our server lore. If you encounter any problems, or just have any general queries, please do not hesitate to contact me on the details below:

 

Please make the above corrections, and contact me on Discord at Tahmas#0117 once having made these fixes so I may re-review your application.

You may reapply immediately, however please ensure that any previously suggested corrections have been made.

Additionally, you are welcome to join our  New Player Discord if you haven’t done so already as to meet with the existing community and staff members.

 

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