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Wolffrockk

By Wolffrockk

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using OOC knowledge as an advantage an IC knowledge
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing something your character cannot do other wise or forcing actions on another character
    Status: Denied

The early years of Maars life was full of being taught the ways of his people and adopting the traits his father wish to imbue into him. Only being verbally taught the ways of a warrior and worships towards the God of War. Maars only being a young boy has only aspirations set by his father and only wishes to make his father proud. His father being one of the better warriors of his time cant help but being harsh and what some would call brutal on Maars. Failure meant punishment, success meant harsher challenges.

As Maars got older he grew accustomed to his fathers harshness, and it began to show as he expressed his anger with those around him. Taunting and urging on those around him which caused constant beat down to which only led to further punishments from his father due to his failure. There was a certain point where after all the beatings and punishments, something happened and. . .Defeat became a distant memory and victory came back to back and continuously more often.

As the young man grew to adulthood he brought a certain renown to himself. He wasn't a bad guy, but he wasn't good either. He was easily brought to an aggressive stage and quickly resorted to violence to solve problems. He usually had good intentions however he was only taught a few ways of handling obstacles. His quick temper and new found arrogance quickly caused arguments and small brawls to which no victor was found. At one point Maars aggression and anger grew so great that he challenged his father to a duel. It was during the furious duel that made Maars realize that if he were to win he would only prove his father correct. During the duel he saw a critical vulnerability to which he didn't take. This however putting him in an offset position allowed his father to capitalize and bring a long slash across Maars' back, rendering him incapable. The first drop of defeat to be tasted since he was a child. It was also the most painful. Being nursed to a near full recovery, he left without a word.

Character Name: Maars
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: A prime example of a human, being defined, hardened and athletic. His moss green eyes contrast with his dark brown hair.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera.

 

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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Your application has unfortunately been...

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Your time has expired, you may re-apply immediately.  

Please do refer to the other post above for the following changes you need to do before your application can finally be accepted.

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