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Kikato Jiara

By Kikato Jiara

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Skin Colored Tomato#7182
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: your character getting knowledge without them doing anything in the game to gain that knowledge.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: cheating in a way that makes you un stoppable.
    Status: Denied

Kikato Jiara was born to a peasant family in a small farming village in Cannonist . Once he was 6 he was put to work to help the family, doing odd jobs around the village and in the small family farm. He made a friend who he would play with once he was free from his duties. He played with his friend in the surrounding woods every time he could; playing tag, portend sword fights with sticks. Then once he was 12 he was playing knight with his friend and when he was going to "sedge" his friend's fort he found the fort destroyed and couldn't find his friend, he looked for him everywhere he could but non the less couldn't find them . When he got home after looking for his friend his parents sent him way to live with his uncle for reasons unknown to him. His uncle was was  strange lad always drunk and talking about war like he was a knight himself when he was just the town drunk.  When Kikato Jiara became 14 he enlisted to be a solider in hopes he would be a knight like the stories he was read as a child and played as with his friend. he was in the army for 4 years before he lost the kingdom of Curon that  he was fighting for to a betrayal by a allied kingdom Named Oren and he was forced to become a "adventurer" of sorts when all he does and mercenary work.

Character Name: Kikato Jiara
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: They are 5'6 with blue eyes, brown hair, they as a slim but strong build, they are 170 pounds, they are in chainmail and rags under the chainmail.
Roleplay Scenario:

I am here to start a new life and adventure in the new land, meet new people and make a living here. I do not wish to return to my homeland.

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your meta- and powergaming definitions are too short currently, and your powergaming definition is not quite what I'm looking for. I would like you to read up on the server-used definitions of these terms here. Please also include an example with both these terms.
  • Your biography has some wrong lore references, such as referring to the Canonist religion as a place. In addition to that, note that your character is too young to have ever been in Curon, as the city has been gone for more around an IRL year, if not more. As well as that, note that currently Oren is not a Kingdom, but an Empire.
  • Your roleplay scenario is too short, and does not follow the requirerd guidelines. Please follow the ones found below, and rewrite your scenario.
    • Must be at least four sentences.
    • Include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.
    • Include at least one action.
    • Cannot include any sort of metagaming or powergaming.
    • Should not project ANY thoughts into emotes. Emotes should only include what others would see, not what your character is thinking.
    • Must be in third person.
  • Your skin is not entirely up to LOTC standards. If you need help finding a proper skin for the server, feel free to browse our skin archive, found here.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message DelfShadowLeader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Zhikarta

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message DelfShadowLeader to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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