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Alpark1391
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: A gaming universe outside of the gaming universe
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Playing a game with the intention to progress to a specific goal.
    Status: Denied

Atron grew up with magic and wisdom in his life. He has always been good at using magic and what he uses when he has to defend his home. Atron is one of the few Elfs that know some of the ancient language despite his young age. Atron can understand some words but not many. One of his weaknesses is the fact that he is terrible at hand to hand combat and sword combat. He can still take out an entire army though using his magic and his powerful staff. He found the staff when he was exploring and he is very good with it. It is what helped him win many of his battles.


Character Name: Atron
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 400
Physical Description: Dark grey top with light grey bottom. long ears, platinum hair, and golden tint to his skin. Blue eyes and very tall.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Welcome and thank you for applying to LotC! Unfortunately, your application didn't quite hit the mark, but worry not! You aren't denied, simply put onto pending. Below I will list the changes that must be made to the application in order to be accepted. You have up to 24 hours to make the necessary edits or you'll be denied. If you require any help during this process, do not be afraid to contact me here over the forums. I am more than willing to help. The issues are below:

  • Both of your definitions are incorrect. Take a look at the rules or google them and you're bound to find the right definition! Make sure to update them and ensure you don't plagiarize!
  • Sadly, you cannot apply to the server with a character whom knows magic Fix that up for me, please. This also applies to the staff.
  • Your backstory should also include at least 1-3 references of currently accepted server lore. Please add at least one reference.

Below you will find some helpful links that will aid in making your application. I would definitely suggest joining the LotC New Player Discord, we have a devoted community of players more than willing to help in anyway possible

 

LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

LotC Public Discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

 

LotC Wiki: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

 

LotC High Elf Wiki: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves

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Considering it has passed the 24 allotted hours and the necessary changes haven't been made, this application has been denied. But do not fear, you can always reapply. Before applying again, you must wait three hours. Below you will find the necessary additions or edits that must be made to the application:

  • Both of your definitions are incorrect. Take a look at the rules or google them and you're bound to find the right definition! Make sure to update them and ensure you don't plagiarize!
  • Sadly, you cannot apply to the server with a character whom knows magic Fix that up for me, please. This also applies to the staff.
  • Your backstory should also include at least 1-3 references of currently accepted server lore. Please add at least one reference.

Good luck with your next application! If you require any assistance, do not be afraid to contact a member of the Application Team!

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