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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: out of character knowledge of a situation your character doesn't have knowledge of
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You can't control the actions of another player
    Status: Denied

Jack Fjord was born in the world of aegis being one of the smartest in his village he excelled and learned quickly. Jack wasn't very social as he didn't make many friends as a kid and was more of an outsider. His life was peaceful with no trouble. But soon trouble would come underway as the world was lost to the undead. Jack and his family escaped to the verge and then sailed to the world of Asulon. There Jack learned how to skillfully hunt animals by using axe, swords, and bows. His time at Asulon was not great as his mother and father were killed. And he learned to live on his own as nobody bothered to take him in. An orphanage did try to take in Jack but he ran away before they could. Asulon was peaceful. But Asulon was struck by a number of natural disasters which caused Jack to leave. Jack got on a fisherman's boat and sailed to Elysium. During the night the landscape was ruled with ghasts and zombie pigmen. But yet again a disaster would strike where Jack lived a massive volcano erupted leaving his town in ruins and friends dead. There was also a chicken plague going around. So Jack left to go to Anthos. In Anthos Jack met a teenager his age named Lucas. Lucas turned out to also be an orphan. And Jack and Lucas came to have a good friendship. And so Jacks adventure began.

Character Name: Jack Fjord
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Jack Fjord has green eyes and brown hair. He weighs around 140 and is fairly skinny but has some weight. He is 5'8"
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

Your a guest account, because of such i must deny you because you are unable to edit the application.

Your powergaming definition is incorrect and also the exact same as another app i have reviewed, please change it into your own wording and correct it.

Your dates are far off from being correct and do note that there is no world named Elysium.

You also must include 1 lore reference in your bio, and it must be like an event or a city.

 

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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