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    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you use information you gained out of character to influence your in character descisions .
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you make your character too strong just to win a fight or change how your character fights for OOC reasons.
    Status: Denied

     Near the city of Santegia during the year 1626, Richard  was born.He grew up in a rich family of a banker, and did not know any problems in life,like all people from noble families,he studied at school,where he liked such Sciences as alchemy, anatomy,geography and others.Most of all he liked biology, he just lived it.And at the age of 18 he entered the Academy for a course of medicine.from which he graduated,at the age of 25 years with success.

    He lived in abundance, mostly he treated, only people from noble families, that brought him prominence in certain circles. He was very proud, and always treated for a large fee.But one day, in the city there was an outbreak of cholera, which eventually.many people died,and his parents.

    He was in a terrible state,seeing as so many people die, and he can not help them, because not invented at that time,the right cure for cholera.

He thought a lot about life and death,and eventually realized all its value . He doesn't have anyone else, just him. He made hard choices,and overcame myself and began to help anyone in need. First, he gave all the jewelry from the house to the poor, and the house gave a large family.After he dressed in simple clothes,and in easy the armor,which him gave one poor knight, for something that Richard cured his daughter.he Packed a bag with things and surgical supplies,and went on a journey from his hometown to help all people in need.

    Where the road will lead him to riches and glory,and perhaps to death,nobody knows...


Character Name: Richard Black
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: Richard is tall,he has dark blond hair, light brown eyes, he is dressed in simple work clothes, top, sometimes wears a light armor.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Upon review, your application has been Denied. Do not fear, it is not a permanent denial, you can reapply at your leisure. If you require any assistance with future applications, do not be afraid to ask a member of the Application Team for assistance. Before reapplying, I also recommend you register an account with our forums, that way you can edit your next application and have a 24 hour grace period to make any changes necessary. Below, you will find the necessary changes that must be made to the application in order to be accepted:

  • Your character cannot be born a part of a noble family without approval of a currently existing noble house. It can be attained through RP if you don't have approval.
  • Your character requires at least one flaw in order to provide depth to your character.

I suggest taking a look at the LotC New Player Discord, as it's full of hardworking and dedicated members of the community that can help you get your next application accepted. On top of that, they can help you find roleplay once you've been accepted!

 

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