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Arthur Henrickson

By Arthur Henrickson

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: The use of information gathered out of character, to be used in character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: The use of unfair, unrealistic, god-like actions as a character.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Arthur approaches the man, and tells him that, "I am looking for an old friend, its been a while, so I thought I'd pay a visit." Henrickson proceeds to look around the port, and continues to ask the man, " I would appreciate it if you could give me directions." After chatting with the man, the man hands Arthur a map of the city, which he then uses to navigate around the various shops, and structures.

Character Name: Arthur Henrickson
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Overall average human male, with black hair, brown eyes, somewhat muscular. About 6 ft tall, with a weight of 150 pounds.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! (You need one more! God is too vague.)

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards (due to lack of shading). Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description (Hair color). Please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. (Skin color does not match a human's skin tone)
  • Be sure to explain WHY your character likes/dislikes those things about himself in your Character Likes/Dislikes Response.  Only include things that he likes/dislikes about himself, not things that his general likes overall!

     

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message teawithsarah. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at teawithsarah#0808

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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sarahbarah

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  ♥

 


 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0808]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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