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Armanda_Salazar


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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using informations outside of your characters life to use them as guideance
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: act of any character doing something they'd realistically be unable to do.
    Status: Denied

Calenlasse is a powerful Elf, studying the lore and history of the world. She is a good fighter, being able to use a bow and a sword well. She has Wood Elf in her blood since she dresses more in woodland style clothes. She has Blond Hair and bright blue eyes. Calenlasse doesn't have many friends or family, she is alone. some people have asked her where and who her parents are but she doesn't know. She has all the typical Elven traits. She has long and silky hair braided up at the back. she is quite tall. nearly 6.5ft tall. her ears are not long, but quite small and pointed. she isn't as thin as most High Elves. She also studied magic and is quite adept in it.


Character Name: Calenlasse
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 1200
Physical Description: Long Black Hair braided up at the back. Robes and a Woodland style crown or Woodland Style Clothes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Denied.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons - 

 

- Please use information provided from the server lore, this can be found on the wiki and various other sources on the forums.

- Your persona's race says that they are a High Elf and yet you say they have Wood Elven blood, they would just be an Elf in this case.

- You cannot know magic in your application, it is something must learn in roleplay on the server and must have an approved application for it.

- 6'6 is at the upper limits of height for a High Elf, and over the average height for a Wood Elf. Explain why your persona happens to be so tall.

- Please avoid using the "missing parents" idea, at least try to explain why those parents are missing.

- Explain why your persona is good at fighting with s sword and a bow

- You say your persona has black hair but the skin you have provided has a hair color which is not black

- Include personality traits as well along with personality flaws

 

You may reapply in six hours. Message me if you have questions or doubts, here is a link to the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw.

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I have many versions of Calenlasse, I forgot I put the Black there.... I didn't realise about the Magic. or that you couldn't be a High Elf and Have Wood Elven Blood, I have a detailed version of Calenlasse but I only just found it hence all the mistakes... I checked over the lore and everything.

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