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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I try to behave within realistic limits pertaining to my characters, and follow social cues and emotions within an interaction. I always ask before i have my character do something that could harm or impact another character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It can ruin tone, immersion, plot progression, and so much more. It’s more impactful and immersive to develop a story through genuine interactions rather than looking it up or asking out of character. It can ruin the experience for other people, as well as take away any kind of tension or emotion connected to a scene or plot.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

Synndis eyes the woman with suspicion, tilting his head slightly to the side. “Promise me a drink for my time?”

Strange old women weren’t his ideal drinking partner, but at this point, he would rather share an ale with a hag than have no drink at all. It had been far too long since he had the warm comfort of alcohol in his stomach.

Her yes was all it took to bring Synndis down onto that cushion, comfortable as if the two were old friends.

 

”My story, then? Let’s see…. my parents were never much of an issue; always treated me right with whatever I wanted. I lived there a while, before they died. ” He scratched the stubble of his chin, a chuckle finishing off his sentence. The woman before him pried at his position. Why come all the way out here, she asked him, if you lived comfortably back home?

 

Synndis tensed at this. Laughed it off with a tight smile.

“I live humbly nowadays, at no fault of my own. Yes, I grew up comfortably, though that life is behind me. My pockets are empty, my family long gone. May as well be a beggar, like you.” He gestured to the woman with a sly smile, though felt his chest tighten with annoyance. He missed the lush life he had before he gambled it all away. Now, the only thing he has to his name are the clothes on his back. 


Character Name: Synndis Eraldson
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 31
Physical Description: 5’.8”, 140~ lbs. Curly black, mid-length hair. Slanted, dark eyes. Pale skin, outfits are more expensive and well made. Orange, red, and blue themes.
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✿You’re on the right track!  just a few things you need to change!


 

✿ Your Metagaming reasoning,  seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

✿ Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstor  states that you are notable/noble, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.

 

✿ Your Skin  does not seem to be a 64 X 64 skin. I will need to see one of the those skins first.  To Apply you must have a regular skin, a Hd skins are mostly for bedrock and Mods. 


 

You only have 24 hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes; you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord: Tigergiri.  If you don’t have Discord, please message me in the forums here! 

If you need to contact me or need help, you can always join the LotC Discord here

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki!

Lastly, here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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✿You’re on the right track!  just a few things you need to change!

✿ Your Skin  does not seem to be a 64 X 64 skin.  To Apply you must have a regular skin 64 X 64 skin. The HD skins do not work on LOTC. 

 

✿ Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstor  states that you were a noble, please remember that you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story.

 

You only have 24 hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes; you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord: Tigergiri.  If you don’t have Discord, please message me in the forums here! 

If you need to contact me or need help, you can always join the LotC Discord here

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki!

Lastly, here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

✿ Your Skin  does not seem to be a 64 X 64 skin.  To Apply you must have a regular skin 64 X 64 skin. The HD skins do not work on LOTC. 

 

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"


 

Here are some Links to also help you out!

 

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