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    Referral: topg.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using non rolepalying infomation
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: if a player words it so that it does not allow a player to defend
    Status: Pending

he had ascaped from the great war and took shelter with his parents  but in return he needed to help the head of the vilage with mining.

after 20 Years he went to his home city Kazulrah to seek for a home there and he got one and also a job as miner in the deep mines.

he loves mining in the mines he is a good miner he can find a lot of rare ore,s.

he learnd to get allong with a axe from a ex-army dwarf

 

 


Character Name: gimmly
Character Race: Cave Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 332
Physical Description: a dwarf with a orange beard, a grey helmet, a blue chest, grey/blue arms, blue trouses and grey shoes
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been placed on...

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-Your biography isn't quite long enough, I'm looking for a good 1-2 paragraph explanation of your character. 

-Your powergaming definition is incorrect. Please fix this, but do not plagiarize!

-There are zero references to LotC lore in your biography. Lore can be found via the wiki or the lore subforum. 

 

If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

 

You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

 

If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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Unfortunately, your application has been...

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-You failed to make the correct changes in the time period provided.

 

You may re-apply in 6 hours.

 

If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. The Application Team hosts a New Player Help Discord as-well if you are interested in hearing from our Application Moderators, General Helpers, and Community to ask them questions and get help with the application process.

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