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    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagame is ooc event carrying ıc event
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: show oneself very strongly in the role
    Status: Denied

When he was child,him village attacked by orcs.Strekon gone from here Suffolk barony land with him family.They are created new life in here.After a while,he lost him family but Henry Lodmund supported Strekon.

Strekon ,raised by Henry Lodmund has become a very good warrior,and also he is now guard in Suffolk barony.He overcome difficult until over come.Sometimes he was hungry sometimes he was thirst but he never forgot his family revenge.He is also waiting fight orcs


Character Name: Strekon Yongzilla
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: He have got brown eyes,he is 1.76 tall,he have got braided yellow hair
light-skinned,he have got chubby cheek,He have got scar in him head
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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You have twenty four hours to make the following changes, before your application is denied:

 

-Please assure you include at least one piece of server lore, this could be where your character lived or a certain culture that he follows. This means, it has to be something that is already (or was) present on our sever.

-Double check your spelling and punctuation to ensure that your biography makes sense.

-Please assure that you correct your Metagaming and Powergaming definition (the meanings are correct, just assure they make sense)

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message me on the forums or my discord: Torky#3015

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There are still aspects of your application that needs fixing, I will give you an extended six hours to make the following changes:

 

 

-Please assure you include at least one piece of server lore, this could be where your character lived or a certain culture that he follows. This means, it has to be something that is already (or was) present on our sever.

-Double check your spelling and punctuation to ensure that your biography makes sense.

 

If you require any more assistance, please feel free to contact me on my discord: Torky#3015

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There are still areas that need improving, I am more than happy to sit through the application stage process with you on discord and help you with the formatting of your application! You can re-apply as soon as you get this message, just message me on discord and I will be more than happy to assist you!

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