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blackout20118

By blackout20118

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    Discord: blackout20118#9549
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: when you get info when not in character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: un realistic and is too OP
    Status: Denied

parents died when i was 5. and my brother died when i was 7 to a blackwidow. best friend is my self.very cheerful. war driven. my sister well thats how my famliy is she died when i was 12

Character Name: soveliss
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: dark cloths, black eyes and hair, strong but not noticeable,5 foot 6", 159lbs
Roleplay Scenario:

"Thanks!" "Im here for adventure and other stuff!!"

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 FULL sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message KingoArcher to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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