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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is against the rules. Metagaming is using outside knowledge that your character doesn't know or shouldn't know. This is done by using in game stuff as well as outisde roleplay information. This is punishable by weeks and even permanent ban if continued
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Having your own character do something they could not. It creates an unfair advantage for characters and other players. Characters are needed to stay within there own realistic roles. Having your charcter not know nay magic and then suddenly in a fight ha
    Status: Denied

Her name Ziera. Born from a family of ‘Pure’ Mali’aheral, her father works with noble men. her family though not noble but still pure. She doesn’t believe that High elves are superior, because deep down she feels that all races are equal and offer their own values to Atlas. She has never left her home in Okarn’thilln but dreams countlessly of doing so. She is very studious. while studying, she secretly learns to fight from her friend Alleac who works for her father. They are forced to practice in secrecy because her father prohibits her to fight. Besides for learning how to fight she does as her family says, she is the youngest of three. 2 Older brothers, which both work with their father and the nobles. All she knows is the city but plans on eventually leaving and traveling and exploring this unknown world of hers. Hoping to make friends and go on countless adventures and live a lie of travel. Though Her parents or strict and unforgiving and plan on making her marrying a ‘pure’ as well. She isn’t afraid to fight if she needs to, she uses her books smarts and cleverness from her study’s of other races to her advantage during battle. she doesn’t know nay magic yet but plans on finding a teacher to help her. Ziera is brave and strong and smart but is also scared of failure and rejection not everything in her life is so positive and happy and she knows that, but chooses to hide it and pretend to be perfect even though she is inflicted with emotions she can’t comprehend yet.  

Character Name: Ziera
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Looking at her she has crystal white hair- braided- while hiding her ears underneath. Clouded Blue/ Gray eyes. Doesn't wear dresses mostly chain mail
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Andustar

Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

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- Your biographical reference to a particular goddess known as ‘Kali’ doesn’t exist. High Elves are typically atheists or agnostic in their culture and worship no deity, nor follow a particular religion. To correct your biography, please refer to the following: Wiki-HighElves.

 

- You must reference at least one suitable piece of lore. Whilst you have named the continent of Atlas, I would like you to go into greater detail on High Elf culture and society, e.g. name of the current High Elven city.

 

- Please fix any grammatical errors in your biography for the next review, so that it is easier for myself to read and pass a verdict on.

 

- Your interesting fact, “incredibly agile and flexible” is somewhat powergaming and unclear. Please word this differently or change it to something else.

 

You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

 

For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

 

You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

 

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Andustar

This Application has since been:

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Reasons for verdict:

 

- Your biographical reference to a particular goddess known as ‘Kali’ didn’t exist. High Elves are typically atheists or agnostic in their culture and worship no deity, nor follow a particular religion. In the future, please refer to the following: Wiki-HighElves.

 

- You must reference at least one suitable piece of lore. Whilst you did name the continent of Atlas, you must go into greater detail on High Elf culture and society, e.g. name of the current High Elven city.

 

- Please fix any grammatical errors in your biography for the application.

 

- Your interesting fact, “incredibly agile and flexible” was somewhat powergaming and unclear.

 

Your 24 Hour deadline wasn’t met. However, you may reapply immediately, provided you have done so no more than 5 times this month.


 

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