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Ivan the Dwarf

By Ivan the Dwarf

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    Discord: mr_hang_out
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: my best understand is to play your character role as best as you can and not do imposable things like a dwarf shouldn't be on a dragon with a sword or something like that as an example.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it disrupts the realism that the server is trying to go for and can ruin the current rp and or any future rp. also it makes it unfair to people that are trying there best to rp and is just unfair in general and should be reported.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Ivan the Dwarf
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 35
Physical Description: Weight : 100lbs-300lbs
Height : 3'5 - 5'0 ft
Eye color : blue
Hair color: black
Outfit: warrior / explorer
appearance: short, has a beard
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))
 umm well Ivan the Dwarf come's from a really old place some where from a under ground kingdom as a Warrior seeking more than just fame, Ivan the Dwarf is here to travel this great world and learn everything old and new. finding new friends and old ones, hope to get more than Ivan the Dwarf came here for, a place to call home or to a place to call the world. 

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Kaii

Changed Status to Under Review


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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.

In your Roleplay Scenario & Background, please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what your character is doing! 

Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!  When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.

Please change your character’s actions to 3rd person.

Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.

Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks.

Example: Judy laughs. “How are you doing?” 

 

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord Heykaiii to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Kaii

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.


The changes were not made within 48 hours.

 

My discord is Heykaiii  if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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