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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and be sure to include examples for each so I can tell you fully understand!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography states that your character became a cadet in the Norlandic military. You must achieve this in roleplay first, so please amend this accordingly!
• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there.
• I would recommend removing that your character hates orcs, since this is a common character trope!
• Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!
• Your Character's Dislikes Response should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. 

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

• I recommend editing your character's fear, since dying alone is a very common fear among people and does not contribute to your character's personality.

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX