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bonemello
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Σ(-᷅_-᷄๑)#6714
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I am pretty socially awkward to begin with, and I am not pone to bursts of over-excitement to the point where I would be concerned about powergaming.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: I only intend to be on voice when I am playing with my close friend. Any small friends made in roleplay here will stay in the game :)
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

"Oh, well let me get you all caught up!" she chimed in. She glanced at the cushion, but the old crone sensed her hesitation. The older gave an additional nod before the traveler felt it was safe to sit. "Sorry," she apologized as she set off both of the old canvas bags that she had been carrying. A light shimmer appeared on her eyes as she was given yet another reminder of her lost travelling partner. "Well, my name is Sylcey Sundew. We came from a land not too far from here, my partner and I. My mother, that drunken hag, used to watch him as a child, so we are not much more than.. I wouldn't really say acquaintances, but we aren't friends. Perchance. I-"

 

"I'm really quite sorry to interrupt, but you cannot just say perchance."  interjected the old lady. The red-haired dame chose to ignore this and instead, settled down into the cushion to cross her legs.

 

"I lost him on the way here, but I hope to find him soon. The folks at home would go right mad if they found out I lost him. We both know how to handle ourselves, sure, but you don't really understand how we grew up. Back at home, nobody leaves. We as a people believe that if we are happy, if there is booze, and if there are smokes, we can dwell there for the rest of our days. They are so protective of what's theirs that they forget that others have feelings too. We fought tooth and nail to get out here, and I intend to find him and reunite with him to continue this journey." She uncrossed her legs, giving a firm stomp in readiness. She scooped up her bags and shot the old woman a quick smile. 

"I think you'll be finding what you seek in the group of white and blue tents on the corner." she finished with a wink. Sylcey gave her an incredulous glare before finally understanding. She darted around, bags swinging. Unluckily, her bag grabbed the hook of the tent flap. Slycey only was able to watch in horror as she realized the entire tent was coming down with her. She quickly detached the bag, ignoring the yelp of surprise and anger from the hag within as she ran away towards her lost partner.

 


Character Name: Sylcey Sundew
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: 2'4 (1/2"), 50lbs, Ginger, Green eyes. Sylcey likes comfortable practicality in clothes.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- How does it make the roleplay environment unfair? Please redo your metagaming question. You can learn more about it here!

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what you would do to avoid committing powergaming, not what to do when you come across it. You can learn more about it here!

 

 

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You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is sefardie If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub


 

Hello there! It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below

 

- How does it make the roleplay environment unfair? Please redo your metagaming question. You can learn more about it here!

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what you would do to avoid committing powergaming, not what to do when you come across it. You can learn more about it here!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  sefardie ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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