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Max Octavius Hill
  • Rules: Yes
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I give my character drawbacks and weaknesses
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it can ruin the fun of roleplaying and ruin the surprise of what's happening next for other players
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Max Octavius Hill
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Brown hair and eyes is about 5ft and around 99 ponds
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))



"Well my memorys a little foggy but I remember flames lots of flames and screaming I couldn't breath to much smoke AHHH!" Max's head rings and he gets a flashback of his little sister Elizabeth and him playing then it flashes to when a big green orc was grabbing Elizabeth and his mother then he remembers getting hit by and orc and flying into a tree because he shot the orc and ran to his sister. "Are you okay the lady?" asks "I'm fine" Max says and keeps talking. "I was running and running to get away I recall seeing huge orcs with swords slashing at my people and they were burning my village. As I was running I tripped thump. I was scared then dizzy as my eyes were closed I remember feeling warm arms picking me up and making feeling safe then hearing the things that saved me yell go go go. They snapped what sounded like a whip then I heard hooves galloping I dosed off after I heard silence no arrows whistling through the air or the crashing of boulders in the soil. I woke up on a wooden floor with a white quilt on top of me I looked around and realized I was in a carriage I walked up to the front and peaked a look at the thing that was driving me it was a human man. Why would a human help me right? I tapped on his shoulder to ask that question and then I realized that was a bad idea I spooked him and he jumped making the reins to the horse snap up the horse reared up and the carriage detached from the horse! The man turned his horse and galloped toward me but the carriage was to fast so I lost him. I was freaking out I held on to the sides of the carriage and waited for it to stop. When it did stop it tipped and I flew out. I stood up and looked around. This is when I arrived here I walked accsidently bumping into a couple people they were all getting angry at me so I ran into this tent and that's how I meant you ma.. ma ma'am and now I'm here informing you about this story." Max smiled a bit feeling reasured that he could tell all this stress to someone. Then after telling that story Max got up and got ready to leave and go on his journey to hopefully find more elves and one day save his sister and mother from the orcs that he disliked but every time max thought of how he disliked the orcs because of what they did to his family he remembered that before his Pa passed away he told Max that everyone is different so that Max would know even if someone does something bad from that race it doesn't mean the entire race is bad. Max always remembers this as an important memory and it helps him calm down and remember peace is right. 

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Changed Status to Pending

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.

 

  • Please provide more actions to your Roleplay Response.

 

  • Your Character Age is too young. You must play a character of at least 18 years old.


 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @plausiblewings2 to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub!: New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.
 

  • You’ve submitted another application! We’ll review the most recent one submitted and use that one for your whitelist application. 
     

My discord is @plausiblewings2 if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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