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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information IC that one would not know IC for any good reason
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing an action without giving the other character a chance to decide what happens to their character.
    Status: Denied

He was born in a sparsely populated village and lived in a poor tailor's family, once a stranger told him about a world he had not seen yet and after Winstanly turned 16 he fled to see it ...


Character Name: Winstanly
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: He is skinny but strong, has brown hair and Blue eyes, very kind
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

Because you are a guest to the website, you'll be unable to edit your application. I recommend you apply as a forum user.

 

 

Your biography is too short, please make it longer. At least one quality paragraph.

Your skin is not appropriate for the server.

One of three interesting character facts needs to be a legitimate weakness.

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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