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ImANobody

By ImANobody

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    Discord: Xchara go BRRRRRRR#0415
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is to know what happened before even if you don't know.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: To be godlike/Having everything go your way.
    Status: Denied

Has been through alot of wars, so now its time to achieve, I m m o r t a l i t y.. So my character goes on a journey to rule the earth and achieve immortality. Father died after fighting in war, siblings none, have no friends. Birth Realm nether. Education was about war, using weapons, ect. Life exp, war and death.

Character Name: Ren Yoshikage
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 67
Physical Description: Attire is all dark a little gray and face is covered in the dark, eyes are black but face is covered in dark. Body build like a reg dark elf.
Roleplay Scenario:

Adventure, Aspirations, and a quest for something important..

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Oh_Ontario

Changed Status to Denied

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions need a little bit of work and you need to use examples. I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

 https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 


 

  • Your Character Biography did not have enough lore references. Please include at least 1 lore references and 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

(Please be sure to give reasoning/examples in your next App)


 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

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Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
 

Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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