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Drorlen_Uvandri
  • Rules: Yes
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you use things to your advantage that u wouldnt have if you were in that situation
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: a way to play a game to get to a certain goal
    Status: Denied

No Body Knows exactly who he is but Drorlen was a member of house Uvandri until it was attacked by orcs bandits who kidnapped him and cut his arms up like the orcs do to all their prisoners. Drorlen escaped their hold and ran to the new lands he was told of to re create house Uvandri. The Old ruins of House Uvandri is in unexplored land far east of norland. He decided to train with the best of the land to find the orcs that killed his family and destroyed his home so he could bring justice to them.


Character Name: Drorlen Uvandri
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 60
Physical Description: Red Eyes, lighter dark elf skin, a cut ear on the left side, sleeves of scars on both arms, piercing eyes
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

Ø Your powergaming and metagaming are definition is incorrect, please review it here!

 

Ø Please add a bit more content/length to your biography. It’s recommended that it’s atleast 7 well made, complete sentences, forming a mid sized paragraph. Ideas for what to add could be: More detail about your childhood/teenager years, a event that affected your life or early adult years.?

 

Ø You’re inferring that house “Uvandri” holds ancient land north to Nordengrad, this would be impossible due us only being on Arcas for 20 years, please fix this.

 

Ø This is more of a heads up then a requirement, but elves are considered children until their 50 years of age, in most elvish cultures.

 

Ø Your lore references require to be a bit more then just naming off a race, that accordance with your persona’s age of 20 and the current year of 1725. Some other examples of what you can use for lore references are: important lore events (Ex. World End events), City names (Cities have names, their not just the nation) and religions. You require two, here’s some pages to use for lore references:

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Please PM me on the forums if you want a invite. Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns

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Your application has been

 

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Due to: 24 hour period is up. 

 

Ø Your powergaming and metagaming are definition is incorrect, please review it here!

 

Ø Please add a bit more content/length to your biography. It’s recommended that it’s atleast 7 well made, complete sentences, forming a mid sized paragraph. Ideas for what to add could be: More detail about your childhood/teenager years, a event that affected your life or early adult years.?

 

Ø You’re inferring that house “Uvandri” holds ancient land north to Nordengrad, this would be impossible due us only being on Arcas for 20 years, please fix this.

 

Ø This is more of a heads up then a requirement, but elves are considered children until their 50 years of age, in most elvish cultures.

 

Ø Your lore references require to be a bit more then just naming off a race, that accordance with your persona’s age of 20 and the current year of 1725. Some other examples of what you can use for lore references are: important lore events (Ex. World End events), City names (Cities have names, their not just the nation) and religions. You require two, here’s some pages to use for lore references:

 

 

You may reapply in whenever, however you MUST make the changes above

 

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire#0044), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire) /msg 

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