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SirLama

By SirLama

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Moxxie#5225
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: its really nice and it makes fun
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: not to strong
    Status: Denied

Lama almost died at the age of 5 because he fell from a tree. At the age of 20 he lost his father and at the age of 33 he lost his brother on a walk. He fell in love for the first time at the age of 50. At the age of 59 he became a father and 5 years later his son died. At the age of 61, he trained a lot with the bow and an axe. At the age of 80, he broke both arms. At the age of 90 he became the 3 best in archery at a tournament.

Character Name: Lama
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 101
Physical Description: a dark gr
Roleplay Scenario:

he would  say that he just want to buy somethign

 

 

 

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WestCarolina

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Character Age is too old. You must play a character of below 100 years!
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!
  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
 

 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Carol#7747 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message WestCarolina to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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WestCarolina

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Please refer to your pending message for edits required!


 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Carol#7747 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also  /message WestCarolina to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki! 

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