cgdoc519

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to a multitude of things that need to be fixed, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so we can tell you fully understand!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
• Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!
• Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
• Your Character Fear and Character Dislike should not be the same. Your character fear should be a personality trait of themselves they dislike, not just a restatement of their fear.
• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
• Your Skin looks somewhat too modern-- more specifically, the pants on your skin. Feel free to take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home?authuser=0

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/