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CharlestheDwarf
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    Discord: CharlestheDwarf#7085
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: The use of external, real life, or otherwise recently discovered knowledge that a character would not have access to in order to influence their decision making outside their decided norm.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Creating a character that is unusually capable for their level of experience, to the point of being among the best in a given task with little reason behind it. IE: A blacksmith who can fight toe to toe with an experienced knight, a halfling teenager that can wrestle the local strongdwarf, or the old wizened man capable of keeping pace with the fleetest of elvish rangers.
    Status: Denied

A ruddy dwarf looked up from a small leather-bound book hardly larger than his hand, a stick of charcoal pinched between two fingers of the other. He stopped to look around for a few moments, as if to look for the individual that the gentleman had been speaking to, before turning back and clearing his throat. “Oh I’m ah... jus’ passing through.” 

He fell silent for a few steady beats before blinking and abruptly thrusting a stumpy hand out towards the man. “Ah where are my manners? My name is Torlumir, migh’ I ask where I could find a place to rest my head for the night? I don’ do too well on ships and could go for something sweet to settle the nerves.” He nodded, screwing up his face a bit and passing a weary glance to the vessel behind him.


Character Name: Torlumir Irongut
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 62
Physical Description: 4'7 | 162lbs | Brown hair/beard | Green eyes | Well-tailored leather smiths apron atop a plain brown short-sleeved shirt
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

Your Character’s Fear, even if it’s well written does not work. Everyone is afraid of death, it is a generic and normal fear. Your character’s fear is supposed to be an addition to their personality. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord zuziee#4323 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well.

»https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

»https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

Not completing the following within 24 hours.

Your Character’s Fear, even if it’s well written does not work. Everyone is afraid of death, it is a generic and normal fear. Your character’s fear is supposed to be an addition to their personality.

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord to zuziee#4323, and I recommend you join the LotC Discord using the following invite:

»https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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