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Kevin smithman
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: As opposed to, " I punch you in the torso, exploding your heart instantly" use "I attempt to punch you in the torso"
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It uses knowledge not known to your character, causing unfair situations like 10 of your friends getting on the second you're being attacked
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Kevin Smithman
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 182 lbs, 5'10, brown hair, blue eyes, faux hide clothing
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Kevin sits across from the hag, he places his hands on his head and stares at the ground, he says" I hail from the kingdom of Balian, I travel the known world in search of rare goods to trade, my name is Kevin Smithman, I have traveled since I was orphaned in Balian 19 years ago"

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please review the term Powergaming and Metagaming, as your answer seems a bit vague. Refer to our wiki for definitions and examples: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

- Your roleplay response should be at least 6 sentences including character dialogue and actions in 3rd person point of view.

Example: John grimaced at the dirty pillow cushion, but still he took a seat. "Hello ma'am..."

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Lack of storytelling. Please include some form of story from your character's childhood. This is to demonstrate your skills and allow us to know a little about your character. If you don't know what to talk about, I recommend family, friends, events, etc.

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please reach the 6 sentences mark in your roleplay response.

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Changed Status to Denied


 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

→ You have not responded within 48 hours!

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After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord mady2007. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/lotc

 

 

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