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VasatiOmarora

By VasatiOmarora

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Information owned in and out of character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Fantasy actions
    Status: Denied

Vasati has been on her own since her parents were killed in a fire. She was born near a fountain hidden deep within the forest that is only revealed by those with good intentions. She learned to speak different languages by spending all of her time in a local library. She was later taken in by witches at the age of five and they taught her magic they practiced. When she was 11 the witches were slaughtered by the king and she was left to defend herself.  After a month by herself palace guards captured her and she was forced into labour. On the eve of her 18th birthday she escaped with the help of her best friend, Nadira. They went their separate ways after escaping. Today she roams throughout the world helping those in need and housing creatures in need.

Character Name: VasatiOmarora
Character Race: Forest Dwarf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: blonde hair, blue eyes, green hood and brown pants and shoes, elf ears, slim build
Roleplay Scenario:

“I come looking for any wounded animal. That is adventure enough.”

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LotsOfMuffins

 

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to a lot of changes needing to be made, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ 
  • You cannot start with any knowledge of magic. Please remove this in your Character Biography. 
    • ”She was later taken in by witches at the age of five and they taught her magic they practiced. When she was 11 the witches were slaughtered by the king and she was left to defend herself.”
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly! Dwarves have round ears, except for dark dwarves.
  • Your Physical Description includes a bit about elf ears. Your character isn’t an elf.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F.

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