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Sylnaer
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I would avoid powergaming by not forcing the outcomes of the actions but solely describing them. "write the actions, not the consequences". I would accept character limits and give space to other players to react.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming ruin the fair roleplay as it disrupts other players effort and removes uncertainity, risk or tension built. Moreover it shifts the collaborative storytelling in competitive exploitation, ruining the general rpg immersive gameplay.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Alarion Syl'naer
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 50
Physical Description: Alarion is a 190cm tall, 75kg , slender elf with golden-hued skin, silver-white hair, deep emerald eyes and wear green and brown leaf pattern robes.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Alarion lower his hood, the dim candlelight catching the silver in his hair as he inclines his head toward the hag. Moving with unhurried grace, he settles on the worn cushion, his voice calm yet edged with curiosity.

 

"I am Alarion Syl'naer", he begins, "A keeper of old runes and witness to the scars left to our forests. A wanderer from the old woods carrying the weight of stories carved into bark and stone. My path leads where whispers of decay linger, and it seems that path has brought me to your door...What is it you know of me that I do not?". Alarion inclines his head slightly, settling his hand lightly to his knees, patient and unblinking, as he waits for her answer.

 

 

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Hiya! I'm afraid I can tell straight away- and some of the detectors used, has shown that a majority of your backstory is AI generated. Please know that AI usage isn't tolerated LotC and although translators and aids such as Grammarly may be accepted, your backstory had returned results saying it was almost entirely written with AI. I'll give you this chance to attempt to write a proper backstory.

 



 

You have 48 hours to make these changes otherwise I will unfortunately have to deny your application. When you have finished please message me on the forums or contact me on Discord @itsjustmemorgan to let me know so I can review it!

 

You are free to ask me any question regarding your application or LotC in general, additionally if you wish to speak to those in the community take yourself towards:

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As well as this if you still need help:

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • You haven't done what was requested.



 

My discord is @itsjustmemorgan if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

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