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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: crostoo
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I avoid powergaming in roleplay by simply follow the rules of roleplay and don't think that my character has control over others or over the world
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming disrupts fair roleplay because it gives unfair advantages over other players
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Carl Carrot
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: He's 182cm, Kinda muscular but slim at the same time, he's got brown eyes, hair and beard and only wears one outfit since he's poor
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))
"Oh... good evening ma'am" i say as i sit on the cushion and try to see her better "So my story is quite simple actually. I'm just a normal Hunter, i loved making people happy with the food i  hunted and cooked. But my dream has always been to be an adventurer. Therefore one day i decided to pack my bags and leave the small village where i was born, I traveled for a long time, I think even months. The journey wasn't simple, infact it was very difficult, I encountered many difficulties such as wild animals and even some bandits. The outlaws tried to rob me but i didn't want to give them all of my stuff so i fought them. I managed to take down one of them but the other two almost killed me, but when I was on the brink of death a knight appeared and saved me. The kind man then took me to the nearest village so that the villagers could treat me. After I regained consciousness I searched for the kind man to thank him but didn't find any trace of him. So i decided to continue my journey to become just like him.So I've arrived on the lands north of Azura to have a fresh start"

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JustMeMorgan

Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Your definition of metagame could use some expanding, try not to be so wobbly with it- of course it causes issues for players, but how!

 

  • On LotC we do not speak in first person- your emotes should be in third. I.e. "Oh... good evening ma'am" i say as i sit on the cushion and try to see her better should actually appear as "Oh... good evening ma'am" He said as he sat on the cushion and to try and see her better. I noticed your grammar and spelling is a bit wobbly too and I'll hold you to that- if you can go through your backstory and fix these issues up that'll be a massive improvement and show that you are capable to be on the server.



 

You have 48 hours to make these changes otherwise I will unfortunately have to deny your application. When you have finished please message me on the forums or contact me on Discord @itsjustmemorgan to let me know so I can review it!

 

You are free to ask me any question regarding your application or LotC in general, additionally if you wish to speak to those in the community take yourself towards:

Our LotC Discord: Discord

 

As well as this if you still need help:

Check the wiki! WIKI

And our New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • List reason; this message is usually for Ai related things or anything that makes an application an instant deny - see checklist



 

My discord is @itsjustmemorgan if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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