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D33r_Ch1ld

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    Discord: D33r_Ch1ld#9143
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Knowing something that is part of the game before your character knows that thing.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Making a character that is overpowered with no flaws and no weaknesses.
    Status: Denied

Loki look up upon the gentleman was nervous eyes, the stone walls and crowds of people made him tense. He pushed away his fears however and puffed out his fluffy white chest with false pride.

"I seek work! I come from far away in search of my family but it was a lost cause, friend I made in Baldium told me to come here to learn more about how to be in modern society. I am good with wood things, I build good and craft well. I can also listen for ones who need to be heard."

At the end of his words, the deer-man reached into his belt sack, pulling out a little wood carved deer, it was a simple design yet showed he was skilled in woodwork.

Character Name: Loki
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Instead of a Wood Elf, I would like to use a custom race. An anthropomorphic Whitetail Deer.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. 

Unfortunately we do not have anthropomorphic deer creatures as of present, however I can suggest that maybe you could have your wood elf wear horns and a deer mask in place of being an actual deer. I would also suggest adding some more detail to the characteristics and personality of Loki after you've made adjustments to the physical description and edited the parts where you've referenced them as a deer rather than an elf. The beginning introduction of your characters story will also need to be changed as it mentions deer folk.

 

I would also recommend looking at planet minecraft for some FTU woodelf skins that you can use temporarily on the server until you can get a proper one to fit Loki. As we cannot accept the skin chosen by you due to the lore/race limitations. 

Races - Lord of the Craft

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!


 

 


 

Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? 

 message or add me on discord @ Smmer#7932

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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