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David_Sensei
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: camocat9 #9373
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using knowledge gained from the outside the game to your character's advantage
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: saying the your character did something without considering the possibility of failure, effectively letting you do whatever you want
    Status: Denied

Growing up in the City of Ves, Fred had always wanted to fight in a war. So when the War of the Two Emperors came about, he knew this was his chance to fulfill his lifelong dream. Fred lied about his age to ensure his recruitment and then before he knew it he was already on his way to battle. But while he was charging into battle he fell, hit his head on a rock and then lost consciousness. When he came to he had a serious case of amnesia and forgot who he was. He made his way to the nearest city and from the advice, he received after talking with the locals he made his way to the Cloud Temple.


Character Name: Fredrick Erikson
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Is a hard worker. Can be anxious but desires to be something greater one day.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

Ø Character description is supposed to be physical traits, such as height, hair, build and etc.

 

Ø Your biography could be a bit longer, try perhaps two more full sentences? Childhood is a good choice to use, or maybe teenage years where something opposed them.

 

Ø Your skin does not meet LOTC standard, however many skinners have made free skins in our skin archive found here.

 

 Ø Your Powergaming needs to be tweak just a bit, before it’s perfect.

 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

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Your application has been

 

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Due to: 24 hour period is up, please make these changes when reapplying.

 

Ø Character description is supposed to be physical traits, such as height, hair, build and etc.

 

Ø Your biography could be a bit longer, try perhaps two more full sentences? Childhood is a good choice to use, or maybe teenage years where something opposed them.

 

Ø Your skin does not meet LOTC standard, however many skinners have made free skins in our skin archive found here.

 

 Ø Your Powergaming needs to be tweak just a bit, before it’s perfect.

 

You may reapply in whenever, however you MUST make the changes above

 

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire#0044), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire) /msg

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