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By David_Sensei

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: David Sensei #0390
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information that you learned out-of-character, in-game.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: saying the your character did something without considering the possibility of failure, effectively letting you do whatever you want
    Status: Denied

 

Jonas Harlove was born in the city of Ves. His family of five, his father Peter, his mother Megan, and his two sisters, were poor yet lived comfortably. Jonas’ father Peter worked as a carpenter and was usually able to find something to put on the table. Mary was a loving mother when Peter was around, but when he was at work she was very abusive.

One day Peter experienced a fatal accident while on the job. Without a source of income, Megan turned to prostitution and abandoned all of her children. Jonas’ sisters were both of age at this point and had been married to husbands of their own, however Jonas was all alone. This lead to Jonas being bullied quite a bit by the other boys. Hoping to find salvation through faith, Jonas began training under the priests of Canonism in the city of Ves. But eventually, he discovered the horrible values held by the order and decided to leave it and went to Talons Grotto. 

Character Name: Jonas Harlove
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: He has white skin, brown hair and a beard with green eyes. He is 6' tall and underweight. He also wears white robes.
Roleplay Scenario:

None of your damn business!

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to plagiarism and low effort, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • You plagiarized your meta-gaming definition... Literally word for word bro! 
  • Your character-bio needs to be longer and it needs a lot more details about your character.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @ NOZGOD#5616 , and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa  

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