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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Saboor#2671
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming can be defined as using someone's weaknesses as a strength. Having the knowledge to use it against enemies
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: power gaming is accepting challenges beyond completion facing threats and unrealistic combat ignoring the idea of gore and death with intentions of breaking laws
    Status: Denied

'Ugh' what happened?

curiously looking around the scenery 

'who are you and how did u find me human!!'  

'I seek revenge on those who denied me a safe haven'

As the Valkar looks around ignoring the human he realizes its a market place that's full of merchants and vendors seeking work and selling gear. He is motivated to equip and gear up for the challenges he faces throughout the regions. He likes the idea of being a soldier that's payed handsomely while being challenged. He meets other races and elves which he passively controls his anger as he isn't alone. Meeting new faces and allying with those who are tough in the eyes of Valkar. His journey continues 

Character Name: Valkar
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: deformed with a hunched back. Has dark green skin and a height of 6 ft 3. No overall hair. Wears leather and only his weapons. weighs around 120kg.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions need a little bit of work and you need to use examples. I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

 https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 


 

  • Your Character Biography did not have enough lore references. Please include at least 2 lore references and please don’t mention killing a dragon. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

 

  • Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with your biography!

(Please be sure to give reasoning/examples in your next app)

 

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

(Please be sure to give reasoning/examples in your next App)


 

Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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