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DaoShinobi
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: etgiron5794
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I avoid power-gaming by nature because of my desire to have more fun and be immersed. weaknesses or faulty aspects of a character are just another way to breathe life into the concept
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it can cause some pretty unfriendly power balances and in general can ruin experience for newer players because of the potential skill gap. its also just not fun to write a character that way
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Shao [Bertram / Bright Raven]
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Of Asian descent // 5'11 // 180 - 190 depending on meals lol // dark hair // brown eyes // missing a toe (pinky toe right foot) if it mattes
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


I come from the outskirts of Meadowbrook, nestled in-between the hills and a lazy river. All of my life I've tended to my family's meager crops. Dear woman, each dawn, when the dew kisses the wheat, I would wish to myself that the land could whisper secrets of a more thrilling life beyond the horizon. My muscles, hardened from toil, long for a challenge. The endless dance of the seasons offers change, but I long for a different kind of adventure. I will become a Shinobi

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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✿ Your one the right track just needs a quick edit! 

✿ Your Powergaming method, seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

✿ Your Metagaming reasoning,  seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions.  

 

✿ Please note there is no Lore for Shinobi’s that is not something you can come right now. 

 

✿Please make sure to include at least six sentences in Roleplay scenario ! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect. It's a great start! Make sure you are emoting in third person “ He said/she said/ they moved.”  The roleplay scenario must be both action as well as dialogue. 






 

You only have 48 hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes; you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord: Tiger Giri.  If you don’t have Discord, please message me in the forums here! 

If you need to contact me or need help, you can always join the LotC Discord here

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki!

Lastly, here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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✿ Your one the right track just needs a quick edit! 

✿ Your Powergaming method, seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

✿ Your Metagaming reasoning,  seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions.  

 

✿ Please note there is no Lore for Shinobi’s that is not something you can come right now. 

 

✿Please make sure to include at least six sentences in Roleplay scenario ! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect. It's a great start! Make sure you are emoting in third person “ He said/she said/ they moved.”  The roleplay scenario must be both action as well as dialogue. 

 

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