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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Use of outer-character knowledge
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Over powering someone else's decisions in the game for your own ammusment, no matter how realistic it might be.
    Status: Denied

A man and a woman killed in a fire, lit by a group of marauders who adopted a young boy of at age 6 found watching as his parents scream. Little did they know that the boy would never forget the day his parents died. At age 14 he was big enough to take any single one of them on, so at age 16, after waiting to years to plan a way to kill every single marauder, he finally decides to drug their food before they go to bed with something to keep them asleep, allowing him to move silently as he slits every single one of their throats. Astonishingly, he didn't take into account for the marauder captain who was feeling restless and angry about the last raid he had conducted, and didn't eat with his men. As the 16 year old went to slit the captains throat, he gets knocked back by him, incidentally smacking the boy with the butt of his sword, leaving the boys right eye bloody and destroyed. With fear welling up in the boy he grabs the closest thing he could find, being a bag of potatoes, hitting the captain back, dropping his sword next to the boy, ss the boy picks it up he realises that the sword contained an inscription saying, 'Walk in the darkness, to fight for the light'. Reading this the boy then vanishes from the captains sight. 

Character Name: Sphynx
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Bright Assassin with one eye uncovered. Someone with an intensity about him, creating distrust and anxiety for those around him.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Zacho

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

Your biography is of a good length, but lacks and form of lore reference.

Your character description needs to describe your skin, not your traits.

One of your three interesting character facts needs to be a weakness.

Your skin doesnt fit correct outfit genre for the server.

Your powergaming definition is a bit off.

Because you are a guest, you are unable to edit the mistakes listed above. I recommend you apply as a guest next time through.

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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