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DarkStrayDelver


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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using outer-character knowledge for your own gain.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Making decisions that affect other characters story line without getting permisson from them and the server team.
    Status: Denied

Sphynx. A yound heartlander, born from noble means in the city of Johannesburg. However, his parents were falsely sent to death by the Church of the Canon after being accused of conspiring against the crown. Building a distrust for religion, however still contains an open mind. As he has journeyed throughout his life, he had self taught himself the way of the sword after being rejected by many foster families, this not only grew him to be a fine swordsman, but he also grew a distastefulness of everyone around him. Despite his unquenchable anger he hold inside, he is still a young boy at heart and yearns for adventure. With the knowledge of his parents nobility he created a belief of a right to the crown for the Orenian empire,  where he aspires to build his own army to "Take Back" what is his. Wether this is what will happen during his short lifespan is yet to be seen but considering his yearning for adventure, who knows what could happen.


Character Name: Sphynx
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A medium build male, with an assassin outfit, most likely covering hidden blades. His stare gazes into your soul, creating unsettling feeling.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

Your metagaming definition is incorrect. Check the wiki below for info.

Johannesburg was more than 18 years ago since its destruction and isn't on Atlas anymore, so check your dates.

Your characters skin isnt appropriate for the server.

Your character description needs to describe your skin, not personality or traits or anything of the likes.

Because you are a guest, you cannot edit the application. I recommend you apply as a forum user next application.

 

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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