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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: a universe outside the game itself like to tell someone the info about your character in reallife
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: to maximize yourself to a desired goal in the game or a goal in your own image
    Status: Denied

i was once a boy when everything i cared about was destroyed was destroyed i was with my parents when soldiers came and slaughtered my village there unfair leader sent them my parents hid my under the floor boards the second they saw them coming towards the house they burst through the door and killed my mother and burnt the village. my fathers whereabouts is a mystery i'm because he wasn't killed now i'm a self trained assassin very skilled and hunt down the ones who murdered my mother and everyone els in the village and i seek the whereabout of my father due to the events that happened i became emotionally unstable and unable to let go until i find those who seek pain and destruction and give them more then what they bargained for i will not rest till those who have caused pain dies and finally i will find my father and bring out of hiding and if he is dead i will find out why and what/who did this

Character Name: jager
Character Race: KHARAJYR
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: im a young fellow with the blood of an assassin i'm a friendly person to great but never to be confronted by guards
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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MyLittleUnicorn

Your application has been:

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As you applied with a guest account, you cannot be placed on pending where you would always be given 24 hours to fix your application.

But worry not!
You can re-apply in 6 hours!

 

What you need to fix to your next application:
- Your metagaming definition is a bit off

- Your biography has good length on it, however there are a lot of grammatical errors to be found. If you could try to find some of those and fix them!

- Your biography must include AT LEAST ONE reference to server lore. The more the better!

- You have marked your race as kharajyr 'kha', yet your character sounds more of a human than cat type. I suggest reading from our wiki what kha's are.

- Please include at least one weakness in interesting facts - part.

- Your skin isn't good for character that is put in kharajyr race, please fix it or change your race 

 

Many of the fixes have answers that can be found from the WIKI , but do remember that copy pasting answers from the wiki or any other website will most likely lead to instant denial. So do type everything yourself and with your own words!

 

 I also recommend you to join in The New Player Discord !

And of course, if you need any help or if you have any questions, feel free to at all times contact me here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game. My username is MyLittleUnicorn

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