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DESRRALACK
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: DESRRALACK#4085
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It's an action where information that has been obtained out-of-character is used to do something in-character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: They're impossible or lore-breaking actions that someone carries out in-character.
    Status: Denied

This human was found in an abandoned cottage a year or two after being born by an orc called Uggokh, the last one of his clan; his real parents were never found. Uggokh was not interested in taking care of the baby at the beginning, but realized how strong he seemed to be by not eating anything at all for probably days. In the next few years, the orc taught the child how to survive in the wilderness and started to even love him, but something began to grow in Uggokh’s mind, his natural curse: “What would happen if I killed this child?”. Time passed and the orc’s bloodlust got worse, until one day he couldn’t resist the temptation and forced the boy into a fight. Interestingly enough, the child didn’t refuse, but only asked one question: “Would your clan be happy knowing that you killed the only kid that’s left? I thought children were valuable to orcs… Maybe I was wrong though…”. That response stopped the orc, the kid was right, so he decided to commit suicide before doing any harm to the boy. Till this day, the boy never got a name, so he decided to call himself The Talker or Talky to the majority of people.


Character Name: The Talker
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: He wears a black suit with a red hat, has long brown hair, his skin has a light pale color, has a slim type of body, weights 122 lbs and measures 5'3.
Roleplay Scenario:

"Why, hello there, handsome man! I'm looking for new things to try, do you have any ideas?" He says, smiling sweetly while doing it.

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography includes powergaming, for example a baby would not be able to go without for more than 48 hours, let alone ‘days’.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your skin cannot include excessive noise shading, please change this.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 


Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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