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Dilhavia

By Dilhavia

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using info that you've gained out of character as an advantage for your in-game character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: ''Dilhavia swung his battle axe down and cleaved Derrick down the middle into two half's.''
    Status: Denied

Hello, I'm Avon, a dark elf who is 100 years old, I grew up with 3 brothers and 1 sister on a mountain in Arcas. My mother was abducted by orcs because of her beauty and I was only 5 years old. My 2 older brothers died in combat at 65 and I had to protect my 2 little siblings from thereon. at the age of 18, I became the strongest fighter in the clan.  

I left the clan to hike and train. I trained myself animals, elves, or other beings for 20 years. When I was 38 years old I decided to go home to become head of the clan. We were only 10 dark elves in the clan and could not defend ourselves against other monsters, so we were undercover in the cave where we could not be found. When I was on the way back that lasted 2 years, I was attacked more often by bandits. I couldn't always defend myself and was often robbed or beaten. When I reached the village I was relieved that almost everyone was still alive. The elderly died of small miraculous ignitions. My little sister moved to a people's village to pursue a career, and I was happy with it. Since we were only 8 elves now I decided to look for a new cave and we moved north that took 5 years away we just survived it now we are in a safe cave I went to the human village to find my sister I helped her 4 years to make ends meet when I came back to the cave was filled up and probably all dead. from there on I started as a nomad.  I always wanted to enter the Kingdom of The Principality of Aegrothond Life

Character Name: Avos Dilhavia
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 100
Physical Description: White Long Hair ,Red eye, a normal body Build, weight 85 kg. and long1.79 m
Roleplay Scenario:

When Avos Róża happened, his journey began from the beginning.

"I came to work for money, so I can rebuild my clan." Avos states to the tavernkeeper, "Do you have anything to eat or any work for me?" Avos pulls a stool up and takes a seat, "I am quite good with a sword or if you do need, as a guard."

Avos leaves the Tavern and accidentally knocks a person. The man would grumble "Look where you are going" and continue angrily, at the same time Avos pocketed the man's money and thought "He is an idiot" and goes on with a grin. Avos now goes to the Kingdom of I always wanted to enter the Kingdom of The Principality of Aegrothond Life to be able to live there.

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message __Gavyn. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at gavyn#4574

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here 

: https://discord.gg/lotc

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand. Please include a clear definition of both aswell!

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message __Gavyn. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at gavyn#4574

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here 

: https://discord.gg/lotc

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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